Friday, July 1, 2011

Rate these lyrics 1-10, 10 being the best?

I know this is a lot different than my other lyrics i wrote...

Our band is called: The Crisis Code (But we will sing this with an
All-Boys band named: Boisterous and other Crescent-filled Nightmares,
i know the band name is a little weird)
The Album will be called: Fall under the Remedy

Boisterous and other Crescent-filled Nightmares came up with the title
it is:
We have came a long way honey so don't look back now, all there is, is
skeletons of the once loved.

(I guess they like long titles O.o)
We are walking through the halls,
Of empty heartless ribcage walls,

A creepy, scary voice calls,
Under eroded bones it falls,

Angels flying,
Love is dying,

Hearts are spoiling
Blood is boiling

This is zombie love,
A skeleton's dove,

Honey please don't look far back,
Because we're on the wrong track,

Heading into the graves of misery,
This is a bitter-sweet victory,

Is our love really worth,
Being buried in the earth,

Our love is strong,
So baby come along,

Dance and sing,
Sway and swing,

To the music,
Of another story,

The beat is going fast,
Are heats about to blast,

So baby please,

Our love is strong,
So baby so long,

Dance and sing,
Sway and swing,

To the music,
Of another story,

We are walking through the halls,
Of empty heartless ribcage walls,

A creepy, scary voice calls,
Under eroded bones it falls,

Angels flying,
Love is dying,

Hearts are spoiling
Blood is boiling

This is zombie love,
A skeleton's dove,

Honey please don't look far back,
Because we're on the wrong track,

Heading into the graves of misery,
This is a bitter-sweet victory,

Is our love really worth,
Being buried in the earth,

Our love is strong,
So baby come along,

Dance and sing,
Sway and swing,

To the music,
Of another story,

The beat is going fast,
Are heats about to blast,

So baby please,

Our love is strong,
So baby so long,

Dance and sing,
Sway and swing,

To the music,
Of another story,

Please rate 1-10
Not its not suppose to be screamo or heavy metal, i guess it would be
rock... i don't like screamo or heavy metal that much and i certainly
wouldn't be able to write one!!!
Btw!!! The All-boys band was going for something a little but like
Panic at the Disco (I guess that explains the long names!!!)

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